These days, people enjoy a lot of time away from their work and school obligations. Many people use this time to visit new places and learn about them. What do you think is the best way to learn about a place you are visiting for the first time?
Going to a museum
Joining a guided tour of popular attractions
Visiting a popular shopping area
Spending time away from the work and responsibilities at foreign locations are one of the best times people enjoy in a year which help them to relieve their stress get them prepared for the next challenges they face. Personally, I believe that individuals should prefer a proper instructive tour covering the most attractive spots of that place which may help them better to understand more about the place they have visited. I feel this for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, for whatever things a place is appreciated or well-known are completely covered in the tourist guides. All the places, things, food, etcetera for what a place is known for is covered in great detail along with the timings, locations and many other precise details. Any place becomes famous or popular because of the sum total effect of the famous attractions of that area. Therefore, in order to learn everything about a foreign area It is always advisable to participate in the guided tours provided by the local tourist companies of that place itself. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About 2 years ago, I went on a business trip with my father in a city named Ahmedabad. We had one day left of our trip in which I and my father both wanted to learn more about Ahmedabad. So, we enrolled ourselves in a local tour of the city, The guide took us to several places in the city which we never heard of before. It was a very satishfying experience and by the end of the tour I had known much about Ahmedabad.
Secondly, joining guided tours is a lot cheaper than only shopping or travelling individually. Out of state travellers are easily exploited by the locals by demanding more money than the actual cost in many areas such as shopping, travelling fares and many more. Although if we have a tour guide instead, he will make sure that we pay just the fair amount for the goods we purchase and the services which we use. Moreover, many tour guides have contacts with the hotel owners which can help the travellers to strike a deal at a lower price than the usual. For example, My brother went to Mumbai for enjoying his holidays. There he stayed in a hotel for 3 days which accounted for a bill of 15,000 Rupees. Next year in the same month I also went to Mumbai and lived in the same hotel, but took a guided tour of Mumbai. The guide was able to arrange a deal at a price of 12,000 rupees for three days. Hence, there are various benefits of having enrolled in a guided tour.
To sum up, I would like to conclude that Guided tours should be preferred by individuals because of the enormous amount of benefits and the proper learning it provides about that place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-state'?
Suggestion: Out-of-state
...ly shopping or travelling individually. Out of state travellers are easily exploited by the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i feel, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56057494867 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50456956659 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517453798768 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8473210291 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.954545455 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1363636364 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209541370212 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576392533093 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530760448385 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137630065713 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697227307711 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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