Essay topics:
describe your personality
My name is Taleb Maleki,I'm 25 years old and I come from Dareshahr in Ilam province. My father is farmer and my mother is housewife. I have three sisters and two brothers, I'm the youngest child in our family. Now,I'm in second grade of master and working on my thesis,it's about surgery scheduling.
I have a lot of friends because I'm friendly. I like sports that are exciting such as boxing,football,but never follow them and perhaps be regret for rest of my life .
I like read Markes' books.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Im
My name is Taleb Maleki,Im 25 years old and I come from Dareshahr ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
My name is Taleb Maleki,Im 25 years old and I come from Dareshahr ...
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Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...m 25 years old and I come from Dareshahr in Ilam province. My father is farmer an...
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Suggestion: I'm
... I have three sisters and two brothers, Im the youngest child in our family. Now,I...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Im
...Im the youngest child in our family. Now,Im in second grade of master and working o...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...m the youngest child in our family. Now,Im in second grade of master and working o...
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Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , its
...grade of master and working on my thesis,its about surgery scheduling. I have a lot...
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...rade of master and working on my thesis,its about surgery scheduling. I have a lot...
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Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...uling. I have a lot of friends because Im friendly. I like sports that are excit...
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Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... because Im friendly. I like sports that are exciting such as boxing,football,but...
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Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , football
...sports that are exciting such as boxing,football,but never follow them and perhaps be re...
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Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd perhaps be regret for rest of my life . I like read Markes books.
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...erhaps be regret for rest of my life . I like read Markes books.
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or rest of my life . I like read Markes books.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'second', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292452830189 0.229887763892 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.132075471698 0.158761421928 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0660377358491 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0377358490566 0.046263068375 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.122641509434 0.0685040099705 179% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11320754717 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0283018867925 0.0351676179071 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90340209396 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0309702414327 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0188679245283 0.0887237588012 21% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0209618222197 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00943396226415 0.0139019557991 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 493.0 2387.08602151 21% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 89.0 408.028673835 22% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5393258427 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.07147865564 4.48200974243 69% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325842696629 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.202247191011 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123595505618 0.174417080927 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101123595506 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90340209396 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 212.727598566 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.76404494382 0.524397521467 146% => OK
Word variations: 77.0858256723 59.2087087015 130% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6684587814 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 12.7142857143 20.5533526081 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1222000985 48.84282405 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4285714286 120.699889404 58% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 20.5533526081 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.54480286738 252% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 32.9390048154 45.7405998639 72% => OK
Elegance: 1.48387096774 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0981049041645 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.063705071621 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.628560048626 0.497263757937 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192915014208 0.151897553556 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.103272562021 0.336927656856 31% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0543234939394 0.067059652881 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8870967742 25% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 13.6433691756 29% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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