do agree or disagree that children should be helping each other?
Hectic life has a tremendous impact on people's life, especially children. They should learn how to help others in order to survive in there life. From my vantage point, I believe that kids should learn how to cooperate with other mates for the following reasons.
To begin with, cooperation with others can enhance a child's personality. They could be more confidence by helping other people. For instance, being a helpful child means that the child will has good personality because all people like assisting individuals. By collaborating with other classmates, the child could enhance his imagination. He could deal with different situations. Also, after the child graduates from a school, he could survive in his practical's life. For example, my brother was a helpful student. When he finished his studying and got hired. All his colleagues liked his behaviors because he helped all employess when they were needing. As a result, his director noticed his personality and gave him a high work position. Then, the director hired him as leader for his group to help them to deal with their problems and Handle work's obstacles. Consequently, cooperation and collaboration with other kids could enhance kids personality.
Finally, helping others have a positive influence on children's health. They could be happier than others. For instance, many contemporary diseases become more prevalent between kids such as autism and tension. By helping others, a child could make good relationships with peers. All his friends will like to play and spend time with him. However, an uncooperative kid could stay alone because he could not make a perfect connection with buddies. Therefore, the unhelpful child is more expose to loneliness because he does not have many friends. Consequently, being a helpful child has a positive effect on a child's health.
To wrap it up, learning how to help other kids have an enormous impact on child personality and health
- tpo 05 3
- tpo 33 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily Use specific reasons and ex 60
- what do you thing better for students studying too many material to improve their grade or studying 3 4 subjects 70
- which one better to work close to your home or to live far away from your work with high salary which one you would like and why 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...helpful child means that the child will has good personality because all people lik...
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Line 7, column 642, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...cause he helped all employess when they were needing. As a result, his director noticed his ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24444444444 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79118939186 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4958806586 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.8333333333 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.125 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.20833333333 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173996660153 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640976660307 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663588491075 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126450361044 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297433767481 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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