do you agree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Form a board perspective, in the current states of affairs we face, nowadays communication among people has become so complicated that building a constructive relationship is a final goal for most people. Some people may disagree with me, but as far as I am concerned telling the truth definitely strengthen the relationship between people and telling the truth is of crucial importance in every relationship. In the ensuing paragraph the rational fact behind this will be further elaborated.
First and foremost, telling the truth plays a crucial role in a relationship and if the truth is not present, friendship will be ruined. There is no denying the fact that when people want to make friends, they start relying on each other and tell about their lives to one another. It means that he is virtually sure that they are honest with each other. But is case that when his friend is not reliable, he terminates their relationship. For instance, when I was in university I had a classmate who had become one friend of mine. We almost study together and when he was in trouble I did his assignments and as much as I could I helped him. After some months I realized that he is not honest with me and just tries to take advantage of me. As a result, I ended our friendship and did not want to see him anymore.
Moreover, by being honest together, relationship between people will be improved and lasts for a long time. The reason for this is that with being truthful individuals in a relationship enjoy somethings like spending time, going out and doing their work together. For example, I have a friend named Julia. We met at high school ten years ago for the first time. Because she always told me the truth, I really liked to continue our friendship so we went to university and become roommate and after that we become colleagues and now I want to keep my relationship with her until for over.
To wrap it up, telling the truth is a key element for continuing friendship in every relationship. Therefore, never lie, it would guarantee your excellent relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72099447514 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82362740233 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544198895028 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9980115954 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9444444444 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201575505882 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592307818141 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684732177947 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132363618908 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05111239638 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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