Do you agree with the following statement? Do people benefit more from traveling in their own country than in a foreign country?
travelling is an activity which has brought the enthusiasm among many these days. Some people go from place to place with different intentions such as for fun , to get away from hectic work conditions and also as a mode of income. I believe travelling in one's own country will bring more benefits when we start as it provides the confidence to cross the boarders and step into foreign nations as well and it makes the foundation to appreciate different cultures respecting one's own nation.
Firstly, it is vital to note that, visiting different places and areas in one's own country, drives us to admire the local cultures and to identify the diversities settled with that locality with its historical evolution. For an example, most of the travellers in the ancient history, first walked along the paths of their motherland to find out the advancements in art, literature and even in religious aspects specially in the period of Rennaisance. Furthermore, the better understanding of the things which feel so close to yourself provides us to distinguish between cultures and to explore even more complex things in the future.
Secondly, there is a little fear associated with many of the travellers. travelling in an environment which doesn't bring a strange feeling at the beginning makes them confident to achieve the actual goals of their visit. specially for sole women travellers, their parents will never let them to reach unsafe places which associated with adventure. However, if those mighty girls first travel around their region or country, their parents will also never judge their child as a typical girl because she has gained enough experiences to prove herself. Moreover, travelling in his or her geographical location build the determination and even addiction to travel more despite of the gender.
Additionally, this provides the young travelers to identify places which were undiscovered earlier. this adds value to the tourism industry of the country and affects on the national economy. this creates a platform to love the nature and take necessary actions to save the precious nature for the future generation. Similarly this travelling will allow to share knowledge and cultures even within their own country.
In conclusion, travelling in our own nation is of utmost importance to any traveller even at their inception to digging into a world that they have never seen before. this doesn't need much of a capital with the air fare or any restriction in terms of visa to enter into a foreign land. this needs less amount of planning and involves less risk to achieve the expectations of travelling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, as for, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14418604651 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76450481124 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56511627907 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9508565547 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.888888889 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218988909033 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624476871853 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400349897511 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118415384785 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449846809239 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.