I am disagree with the statement that 'The best way to improve the quality of education in country is to increase the teacher's salaries'.
The point is the quality of education is not only depend on the salary of teachers it depends on the management system of the department. if I talked about Indian education system specially central schools than we can see the teacher get heavy salaries which is equivalent to A grade officer but they have a lot of extra work pressure other than teaching. so we can't say that to improve the education quality of education in a country is to increase the teacher's salary.
My second point is if we focus on salary to improve the quality of education than it's just an invalid investment on teachers. because the quality is directly proportional to the resource to increase it. defiantly the salary increase the quality but it's very minimum might be negligible because each teacher has limited sources to develop skills.
My suggestion is to improve the quality of education we have to work on teachers skills and management of education department and if the department feels the salary is not appropriate to work than department has to take steps. only is not play major role in improvement of education in any country. salary and quality of education both has positive relation but after an optimum level they have no correlation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 235.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86808510638 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73696755531 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476595744681 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9208544488 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359912605685 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177151214646 0.076458572812 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157554126021 0.0737576698707 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288899060109 0.150856017488 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176595980011 0.0645574589148 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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