Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The progress is a tonic which enhances the performance and makes us happy. At every level of life progress is different but equally important. For a child progress may be learning a new poem whereas for an adult it may be getting a new project or completion of a little part of a project. I agree progress is always good for everyone which can be understood by several reasons mentioned ahead in the essay.
Moreover, progress keeps humans motivated to continue their efforts in that particular task. For example, when a child completes the first year of school successfully we get more enthusiastic for the next standard or year. But if he fails or gets low marks then he loses interest from the studies. Similarly, a patient feels with progress in health and starts doing more for their health to increase the progress.
Therefore, learning is directly proportional to the feedback and progress is positive feedback which enhances the process of learning. Such as, during preparation for my GRE exam I wrote an essay daily on a website to evaluate my writing skills. As the evaluation graphs moved upward I felt motivated and tried to find new words for essays but if it moved downwards, It made me feel demotivated. We can say that progression is positive reinforcement for our learning methods.
Furthermore, advancement built confidence to achieve higher than what we have. For instance in video games there are different levels arranged from easy to hard and after each level's completion we feel confidence and enthusiasm to complete another. With failure at any level we get stuck and after a few efforts leave the game or start another game. Likewise in life we try to complete one by one challenges in our life and the progress to complete these challenges we get confidence and patients to solve more coming challenges.
Conclusively, some people think progress is as important as basic needs of life. The above mentioned reasons strengthen the view that progress is always good for human beings.
- Nowadays food has become easier to prepare Has this change improved the way people live Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 50
- Many people visit museums when they travel to new places Why do you think people visit museums Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia. Using an observation-centered approach to studying Tertian culture, he concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than 63
- Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for t 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 351, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...s leave the game or start another game. Likewise in life we try to complete one by one c...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, as for, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95575221239 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78754350561 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572271386431 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3363424568 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119629245936 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464382117755 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617464962171 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836430386922 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608442255939 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.