Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.
Television, newspaper, magazines and other media have a great influence on our lives. These are the source of local national and international news but I think nowadays the media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous public figures and celebrities. There are some reasons which support my opinion.
First, media is also a business and business work on the basis of demand and supply. There are people who are always interested in the personal lives of famous figures which we can understand on the basis of Television Rating Points (TRP) of such shows. The high TRP shows and programs are repeated twice or thrice in a day in India to generate money. Earning more money is one of the important reasons behind exposure of celebrities’ personal lives.
Second, the daily news is common which is broadcast on every channel and also printed in newspapers which is too cliche. To become favorite or to grow business people have to present something unique and because of it media covers personal lives of famous people. For example, during pandemic in India the news about corona virus is very common and presented by all media sources but Amitabh Bachhan suffered from corona virus is telecast by many news channels with different ways to generate business.
Third, the media focus their attention on specific people rather than the major news which is not appropriate. For example, during Swachhata Abhiyan in India, the media talks about the prime minister's personal life more than the agenda of the program. Because of this people do not get correct information related to the scheme and the development of the nation is hampered.
Finally, the above mentioned reasons conclude that the media focus on individual famous persons’ lives more willingly than actual incidences. It is not good for the development of the nation and it affects people adversely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, third, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06430868167 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5636266972 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540192926045 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4542505041 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276564026682 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851341428021 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663480703521 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152305566116 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584172680934 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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