Do you agree or disagree: the best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.
Our world has undergone dramatic transformations during the recent decades, tackling number of deleterious ecological problems. Granted, virtually all countries are concerned with global hazardous threats, but few of them manage to successfully handle the environmental problems and mitigate the harms caused to the nature. Though there have been developed various methods to save our nature, I am strongly of the conviction that one of the best ways is to increase the price of fuel. I feel this way for some discernible reasons, which I will explore in the subsequent body paragraphs.
To commence with, today for the operation of most vehicles, which are the main cause of the environmental pollution, fuel is a crucial ingredient. Therefore, by rising the price of the fuel, the country will significantly diminish the number of cars on the streets. Moreover, it will become unreasonable and not appealing for people to have their own vehicles, as they will realize that it will back on them an arm and a leg. Let us take my own country as a compelling example of this. In Armenia the government has rejected to make the price of fuel more affordable, as it has the vision that in such a scenario there will be a boom in the number of cars in the country. As a result, our fresh air, parks and population’s health will suffer greatly. However, today in my country, in fact, the threat of pollution is negligible mainly due to the few number of cars and traffics.
In addition, harmful though, fuel is for the environment, it still remains the primary source of energy in the whole world. But when the price of fuel will be increased, people will definitely start to seek other alternative sources to get energy from. For instance, if this happens, humanity will switch from fuel-consuming cars to eco-friendly electronic cars, or will start to use natural renewable energy sources such as the power of wind, water and sun. In this case, global warming will also be harnessed, as fuel is the main source of greenhouse gases. Moreover, I can vehemently declare that alternative types of energy will cost them much less than conventional fuel energy.
In the light of the aforementioned reasons, I will claim that cutting down the use of fuel by increasing its price will be the half battle of fighting the ecological problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 852, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...llution is negligible mainly due to the few number of cars and traffics. In addition,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, i feel, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96202531646 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90401266129 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.741803464 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.294117647 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168519865812 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586611747772 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472076323403 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112700881575 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385976499616 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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