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Do you agree or disagree that exercise is important for only ages people?

Hectic life has a tremendous impact on people's lifestyles. Some people suppose that the sport activities have many benefits for old people. From my vantage point, I believe that the physical activities have a massive influenced on youngsters for the following reasons.

To begin with, most young people suffer from an obese. They follow deletrious lifestyle that has a negative impact on there health. For instance, Today, many young people are working and studying because increasing of life's commitments. They do not have enough time to cook and prepare food for themself. They depend on restureants, fast food, and ready food. These types of food have a negative impact on their health. they can get weight easily because The ready foods have a high calaries and hurt oil. As a result, young individual will be more expose for contemporary diseases like, obese, high blood pressure, and high blood suger. Therefore, youngster sould perform exercies to have lean body and prevent them to exposefor any disorders. on the other hand, eldery people have a free time, they prepare their food in home in order to have a good health. Moreover, most of them have systemic diseases, they can not execute some physical activities.

Finally, young people should perform sports activities to alleviate their bordem. They could have a lot of fun when they go to the gim. For instance, I am student and working part-time in order to survive in this life. Also, I have two kids. I have many things to do in my day. when I have a spare time. I am going to the gim to reduce my tesions and stress. Moreover, I meet my friends there. Going to gim help me a lot and make me to have a leisure time. On the other hand, Old people do not have many of responsiblities. They can perfore different types activities to have fun because they have a lot of a free time

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: On
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...good health. Moreover, most of them have systemic diseases, they can not execute ...
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...ds. I have many things to do in my day. when I have a spare time. I am going to the ...
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Line 8, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ds. I have many things to do in my day. when I have a spare time. I am going to the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72839506173 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53973903156 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509259259259 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.207560665 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.28 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.96 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.12 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946558517927 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346958426256 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417558657967 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827965489572 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226371890722 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments