Do you agree or disagree with the following satetement? parents today are more involve in their childrens education than were parents in the past. use specifice reosons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, education has been one of the critical things that show a person's success. When it comes to this point, people have debated whether today's parents are more involved in their children's education or they were in the past. Personally, I agree with the first group and it what follows, tow reasons will be discusse to shed light on this idea.
The first reason coming to my mind to substantiate my standpoint is that today education has great importance among modern societies and education is as important as playing for children. Nowadays people should have a great academic degree to be a successful person and to have a secure job and good social class. Additionally in the past people were able to work without studying Therefore, they studied if they want. Furthermore, the majority of humanity could not study at all because the only high social levels were allowed to study. For instance, farmer's children could not study at all and they should merely work. My grandfather had a great job in the bank without studying a lot. Accordingly, their parents did not put much effort into my grandfather's education because they knew that he could find a good job without a great degree.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that today children are very related to their parents and they are not autonomous at all. So their parents should pay more attention to their children to achieve their goal. For instance, when I was a child I was very independent and I did my homework with myself and my parents were not aware of my education. In contrast, my brother was not on his own and my parents should pay more attention to his education and were more involve in his education.
To sum up , based on all argumentation stated above, I think that parents are more relatively involve in their children education than past because nowadays people should have a great degree to be successful and to have a satisfying career in the future and children are more connected to their parents emotionally in all facets of their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... one of the critical things that show a persons success. When it comes to this point, p...
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Line 2, column 314, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...ave a secure job and good social class. Additionally in the past people were able to work wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52815057488 2.67179642975 132% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502873563218 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2585273816 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250003200128 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911514775925 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801015806595 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1692578777 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583473904629 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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