Do you agree or disagree with the following sentences? movie and television have more negative effects on young people.
By and large, it has been established beyond doubt that in today's world, the rate of technologies' progressions and developments are surprisingly increasing day by day which has been affected all aspects of human life, specifically the invention of television and finally making movies. Some believe that movie and televisions have more adverse effects than positive on individuals specially the youth. However, others may have opposite viewpoints about this matter that movies and televisions have got beneficial influences on people's life. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the former viewpoint and in the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons and examples.
The first exquisite point to be mentions here is that in these days because of the tough circumstances and the declination in people's ability to purchase their products, they use from each opportunity to advertise their goods and persuade especially young people with the most appealing and amazing teasers and advertisement by which you as an audience must have thought you require these services or products. Another aspect of these advertisements is that those produce a lot and showing them between the tv series or other tv program take time and would be boring.
Moreover, another significant reason is that movie directors or producers are inclined to attract young people to watching their programs or movies, inclined to make horror films with exaggerated violations and use renowned actors/actresses and cast to elevate the number of their audiences. Consequently, in long run, such type of movies will alter the taste of society and doing crime and violation will be normal. The result of study conducted in my university, has been proven that the rate of criminals and violations in 10 years dramatically have increased in the young people, aged 18-30, and it seems that the enact of rules to prevent them, have not been made sense.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusions that movies and television to increase their income, try to attract audiences, specifically the youth and it might some inevitable adverse effects on their behaviors. Therefore, it is highly recommended that the administrations and authorities must more pay attention to the making of movies, because a large sum of individuals are subjected to these programs, and short-term as well as long-term effects of them can be considered crucial factors in every society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as well as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28535353535 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00469291651 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578282828283 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7715189792 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.272727273 100.406767564 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.6045352989 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267817902999 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935478525242 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620280854632 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144454258109 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574035481895 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 11.7677419355 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 58.1214874552 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.247311828 215% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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