Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Learning about the past is not just learning the fact from the past, but getting to know accumulated wisdom of human society and the course we have made. With this understanding, I firmly believe that all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their filed of study is.
To begin with, since history is people's footprint about all things, any field of study is related to history. There is nothing that can be explained without reminding what had been done before. For example, physics, which seems to be very unrelated to history, have a great relation to it. In the far past, people thought that Newton's theory is correct without any fallacy. However, as time goes, the Einstein's theory of relativity appeared in the world and it became the mainstream of physics instead of the one of Newton. This cannot be understood without careful study about history of physics and in the end the history of physics are related to the general history. In this regard, taking history courses should be made mandatory for all students.
Furthermore, studying history enables people to enjoy a better quality of life. By learning about the past, students can have diverse indirect experience and thereby make a better decision in every aspect of life. This is because learning history means getting wisdom from the past. A recent research conducted by Seoul National University shows that over seventy percent of 200 people answered that reading history book encouraged them to make a better decision. This shows that without history, people might make a mistake which is similar to the one made hundreds of years ago. On this account, history courses are essential for students to make the best decision and ultimately enjoy a better quality of life.
To sum up, I strongly believe that it is desirable for students to take history classes.
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- Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to the specific concerns presented in the reading passage 75
- Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they respond to the specific concerns presented in the reading passage 75
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99361022364 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45689601434 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523961661342 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2734879446 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6875 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235958237551 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857082202347 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113386853231 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160089394957 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888439775399 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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