Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people's lives has already taken place.
In today's progressive world we live in, no one can turn a blind eye to the significance of technology. When it comes to whether the technology will continue to fall people's life under its influence or not, there are different ideas. Some people believe that technology will change life quality in the upcoming decades, as much in the past decades did. Others hold the opinion that technology has already has achieved its best results. From my vantage point, the first group carries more weight. I will explain my reasons to support my idea.
First, the goal of science and technology is to boost the standards of human life, so the more progress of science and technology, the higher the quality of life. It was hard for people in the past generation to imagine current life quality; then, it is not surprising that it would be hard to guess how technology changes people's lives in the future. If you ask someone who lives in 1800 to predict life in the current century, they really couldn't give a realistic approach. People in the past generation couldn't imagine having video calls with others on the farthest continents or share live videos. These are significant treasure troves of technology and, Surprise inventions that will continue to change human life unpredictably.
Moreover, considering NASA projects give us a perspective on possible changes. They try to find a new planet to living. Same as now we could have a flight from china to Newyork, mankind would simply have a flight between planets. Colonization and travel to the other asteroids wouldn't be a dream anymore. Many things that are fiction-science right now will become fact-science. These are all might happen because the technology called technology for its wonders.
Third, there are so many problems that technology and science just try to solve, and the world is not that sheer heaven right now. Environmental issues, global warming, poverty and hunger, lack of resources, unfair distribution of wealth, unbalance in the quality of life in the different parts of the world, to name a few. Although our lives are much better than before, we still far-fetched from an ideal life that actually sync with human deserve. So, technology and science via solving these issues will keep enhancing living standards and make living conditions better for the next generations.
In conclusion, all reasons mentioned above lead us to the conclusion that improvement of world changes as a result of technology and science will keep its speed because of its unpredictable nature, and also there is a lot of challenges in the worlds that they need to solve by science and cutting-edge technology.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 70
- For the successful development of a country it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children five to ten years old than to spend money on universities Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 85
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports Other believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to sch 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, still, then, third, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01793721973 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73655052972 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54932735426 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8155079636 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.727272727 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257153110534 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661977777626 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466236373776 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112051550146 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633101616372 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.