Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

University has a pivotal role in the social structure to reach high quality and individual to achieve successful career life. Due to the importance of education budget devotion in this area rose to be a hot topic. Although some people assume that classes and libraries are an essential part of training and deserve the most budget, others consider sports and social activities as important as classes are. I honestly believe that sports and social activities have an undeniable influence. I think this way due to the following reasons.
First of all, attending sports clubs or any social activities provides more job opportunities. To be specific, we meet people in those locations, we are never supposed to meet in our classes. This will expand our communications, which leads to a broader social community, and if there is a working position, we would be introduced by these relationships. My own experience demonstrates this concept. When I was a university student, my father went bankrupt, and I feel it's time to find a part-time job. At the university's gym, I turn to talk about my urgent need for a job. One of the guys suggests me to work for his uncles' company. I am convinced that attending a sports club or being socially active expand our community, and consequently efficient in our job finding.
Secondly, as an old proverb, A healthy mind is in a healthy body. exercise help students to be focused on their lessons. A person who regularly exercises is strong enough to face any problem and don't get tired soon. even if it is a difficult task he maintains his focus consistently, which is a great feature to pass exams with high grades.
In conclusion, I assume that sports and social activities should financially support. This is because these activities expand student's community and provide job positions for them, and keep them healthy enough to concentrate on their tasks.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, honestly, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94357366771 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91799860415 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608150470219 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.967576887 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186948250686 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569219131451 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757254797662 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111687255844 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651010146011 0.0645574589148 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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