Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can cast doubt on the fact that,relationship and interacting with others is one of the most important factors in one's life to be a successful and have a better life in the modern society. In addition, in all relationship, people have to consider some aspects. The controversial question which arises here is whether, telling the truth is very important in any relatioships and should be considred or not. When it comes to me, it is my firm conviction that being honest is the first and most important factor of a relationship. To support this, there are several resons, two of which are going to be aptly explored in the following.
First and foremost, the most prominent reason which comes to my mind is that, in each relationship like friendship it is very demanding for both side to win each other's trust,being honest with each others provides them with opportunity to strengthen their bonds and enjoy their companionship. It is a fact that one of the means of living in this world is to communicate with others and strat relationship to be succesful in both personal and professional aspect if life. needless to say, only with being honest in relationships, it is a achievalbe for individuals to benefit from that and live a better life.
Furthermore, another noteworthy reason that should be taken into account is that, by telling the truth, there will not be anything for them to disguise from each others and they can speak about every situation of their life at any time they find it necessary. As a result of this discussion, they one is provided with the golden chance to benefit his or her friends experiences in that similar situation. So they are more likely to success dealing with their problems. Tak e my personal experience as compelling example; a couple of years ago, I was suffering from a tough situatio provided with my parents due to their divorce. I started speaking with one of my friends and she advised me to go the therapist to help me cope with situation, which was very beneficial for me and helped me to overcome all that hurdles. Had I not been honest with my friend, I would not have been able to surpass that problems successfully.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that it is very important in any relationship to tell the truth. The fact that is truth is the backbone of all relation and help peolpe to improve their relationships, coupled with they can communicate without any limitation and benefit each others' experience, is the reason which strengthens my claim.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, then, in addition, in short, as a result, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77551020408 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91916802362 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485260770975 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.491218133 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.625 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5625 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168767603799 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668262905822 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464404023177 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125426695652 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440793125515 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.