Being honest is one of important characteristics one can own. However, many people have different beliefs about the importance of always telling the truth in their relationships. Personally, I believe it is strikingly significant to always tell the truth in any of our relationships. I incline to always being honest for some reasons, among which the durability of a relationship and clear conscience are more considerable.
To start with, always telling the truth has a durable effect on relationships. Although being honest with your partner, friend and family members can keep their trust in you stable, telling a lie robs them of it. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. We are always honest to each other with my friend Saba and that's the key point of our fifteen years old relationship and I can undoubtedly count on her. On the other hand, four years ago I found out that one of my best friends named Kimia lied to me about a small issue. Despite the fact that I forgave her, our relation was never the same.
Secondly, always being honest results in a clear conscience and relaxed mind. A person who always tell the truth doesn't have any fear of people finding out his or her lies. As an instance, my cousin most of the time lies to his friends who asks him to go out with them under the excuse that I am busy. As a result he fears that if they would find out he is free, so he stays home to prevent something like this to happen. Also his mind is not relaxed and he always blames himself but never tries to change his personality.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that being honest to each other is one of the substantial properties of any relationship and whenever people start to refuse telling lies, they would create strong relationships. This is because they would be able to easily trust and build long-lasting relationships and have a clear conscience and a relax mind.
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- TPO 46Question Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to old 83
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...onships and have a clear conscience and a relax mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65417867435 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74086581625 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536023054755 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5397819882 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181975397805 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671681459827 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606006716655 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116638783676 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395633378597 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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