Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To be successful, a business must spend a lot of money on advertising.
In the last few decades, the advent of a new branch of business, namely known as advertising agencies, has been occurred. Beyond a shadow of a doubt, nobody can turn a blind eye to the significant role of advertising in the success and the developing progress of a businesses or company. The importance of advertising is as much as that somebody believes that you don't spend money by adverting, but also it's some sort of investment for the company. The same group believe that in order to be successful, a large proportion of the company's budget must be allocated to the advertisement, and this is where the controversy arises. Personally, I approve of the former belief and think that it is always necessary to allot a specific amount of money to the advertisement.
To begin with, Advertising is playing a new role in modern society that is entirely different from its past function. In the past, advertisement just was a tool to introduce the products to customers and let them know about the characteristic features of your products. Today advertising is not just a mean for answering to customers demand, but also it could be a provoking tool for new demands in people. Personally, I've visited lots of people who buy a product or service that there wasn't any necessity, but as it's renowned in social media or TV, they buy it because the advertising impact them and causes demand in their life.
Secondly, in this era where it could be considered that almost all of the products and services at least have different rivals with the same functionality and quality and in contrast to past that there were just limited possible choices, today customers are in the bombardment of different companies advertisement with different options. Advertisement are in the help of companies, when a customer sees a product besides its competitors or even an identical one with approximate similarities, chooses the product which is more familiar for him or her. Different researches have demonstrated from psychological viewpoint when the people are in doubt between several products, they unconsciously choose the familiar product. Most of the advertising agencies use this trick and methodology, and they try to make a unique and exclusive brand for companies by producing different songs, animations, funny stories and even sometimes ridiculous advertisements because their distinct features invoke the brain and the attention of the customer to the products.
To sum up, with taking into account all the above reasons, I agree entirely with the statement that companies if want to get success in today's market they should invest a considerable quantity of their budget to advertising plans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a business' or simply 'businesses'?
Suggestion: a business; businesses
... success and the developing progress of a businesses or company. The importance of advertisi...
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Line 1, column 365, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...much as that somebody believes that you dont spend money by adverting, but also its ...
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Line 1, column 405, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...dont spend money by adverting, but also its some sort of investment for the company...
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Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... for new demands in people. Personally, Ive visited lots of people who buy a produc...
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Line 2, column 486, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...who buy a product or service that there wasnt any necessity, but as its renowned in s...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...here it could be considered that almost all of the products and services at least have dif...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ers are in the bombardment of different companies advertisement with different options. A...
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y of their budget to advertising plans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, secondly, so, at least, even so, in contrast, sort of, in contrast to, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08597285068 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04192566753 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536199095023 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3177054673 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.571428571 100.406767564 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125759640658 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425947712368 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420118132263 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825098785836 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450926390375 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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