Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As human society and technology developed, the amount of information modern people are touching everyday is growing exponentially. Plus, things we are pursuing now are beyond physiological needs, combining with the society that’s increasing in its structural complexity, there are literally much more things happening compared to the old days. Therefore, in this world where things happen fast, without good ability to organize, one’s life can become a chaos.
Take a normal student's schedule in a day as an example, students will head to school at 7:50 in the morning and come home at around 6 in the evening, which means that there’s only a few hours left for students to complete other tasks such as finishing their homework or just doing some leisure activities. The fact that students have to squeeze all tasks into the short time between when they get home and the time to go to bed is a perfect example supporting my view that the modern world requires people to have a strong sense of organizing and planning. For instance, I always note down all the tasks I’m asked to complete on notebooks so that I can keep track of my progress, and I spread my school work into different priorities, so that I always focus on the one that’s due in a few days, and leave the one that’s not as urgent behind first.
In addition, as the internet developed, the use cases for it have slightly transformed from communication to entertainment, which can cause unnecessary waste of time on it. Therefore, without the ability to organize, people can easily spend their precious time on it in a fast-paced society instead of making use of it to get real work done.
In contrast, without the ability to manage and organize, it is very likely that you cannot keep track of everything that’s happening around and you’ll have to spend extra time making up for the mistakes that have happened. For instance, there’s once that I forget to prepare a presentation happening the next day, and the free time that day was all occupied by other leisure activities. As a result, it was until 12 o’clock in the mid night that I realized I still left that task undone, therefore, I had no choice but to sacrifice my sleep time to compensate for the mistake I made due to how unorganized I am.
To sum up, while people still gets 24 hours in a day to play around, there are more things happening around the society without a doubt, which logically make sense that in order to accomplish more in the same amount of time, improving our skills to plan and organize really is the way to go.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... information modern people are touching everyday is growing exponentially. Plus, things ...
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...ganize, one’s life can become a chaos. Take a normal students schedule in a day...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71902654867 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66817828238 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522123893805 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6637386692 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.75 100.406767564 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6666666667 20.6045352989 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151306572756 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566419999121 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409264000787 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790610162038 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188539936859 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 11.7677419355 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 58.1214874552 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.