Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As modern life becoming more and more complex, some people deems that it is essential for young people to have ability to plan and organize. From my point of view, I totally agree with this statement and the ability could makes our life more enjoyable and prodctivity .
Firstly, as a student, we need to balance study and our interests which makes the ability to plan and arganize very essential. It is important to develop a interest but our study is more important. I once for a while obssessed with writing Python Code and debuging cost me a lot of time. Even when I can't fix the problem, it makes me distraction all the time even in the class time. As a consequence, my study has been left behind. After that I try to arrange my coding time only on weekend and start coding only after I finished my homework. So plan and organize is important.
Secondly, to maintain healthy, workout is not to be overlooked but the time to do sports need planning. If we go running in the morning and at 8:20 AM we have class, it is aperantly not good. I once did that and the whole math class I didn't listen a word, I'm so tired. From that on, I try to arrange my sports time according to my class table and now I enjoy a life with sports and not bother my study. Through the proper time sports, I think it makes me relaxed and in turn improve my study quality.
Thirdly, people's condition change in a day. For most people, morrning is their best, the brain is clear. So, for difernet kinds of work, we need to arrange to suitbale time. If I need to reciting words, I probably to do it in the morning. Last time I did it at night, it is too awful, the contrast is too sharp. From this point, arrange work in the proper time could makes the work more productivity.
Above all, in modern life, we need do varied kinds of work, so the ability to arrange and plan is very essential for us, through that, we can make our life easier and more efficient.
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- TPO48 Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they respond to the specific concerns presented in the reading passage 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- When Stanley Park first opened it was the largest most heavily used public park in town It is still the largest park but it is no longer heavily used Video cameras mounted in the park s parking lots last month revealed the park s drop in popularity
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...th this statement and the ability could makes our life more enjoyable and prodctivity...
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... our life more enjoyable and prodctivity . Firstly, as a student, we need to ba...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y essential. It is important to develop a interest but our study is more importan...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ging cost me a lot of time. Even when I cant fix the problem, it makes me distractio...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...nce did that and the whole math class I didnt listen a word, Im so tired. From that o...
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...whole math class I didnt listen a word, Im so tired. From that on, I try to arrang...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'need to recite'?
Suggestion: need to recite
... need to arrange to suitbale time. If I need to reciting words, I probably to do it in the morni...
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Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
..., arrange work in the proper time could makes the work more productivity. Above al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32240437158 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35641108368 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483606557377 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3667535439 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17849867177 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540047456827 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754121693288 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128434281363 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100692023307 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.