Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's society, there are many distractions and responsibilities. There is a need to plan before any engagements to have a productive day. I will explain my reasonings for this statement in the following essay.
First, everyone needs to consider their health and plan for their day, considering the importance of physical and mental health. In the modern world, there are many distractions, including but not limited to movies, games, social media applications, and many such programs. We should not forget about ourselves when absorbed into these sources of entertainment. For example, I always tended to forget my surroundings while watching movies, going as far as forgetting my meals. Hence, my body started weakening, and I got sick. Simultaneously, I would neglect my relationship with friends and family, which led me to be isolated and feel lonely. The loneliness led to me getting depression and acting aggressively. Nevertheless, after organizing and planning my actions for each day and only delegating a particular amount of time to watch movies. Accordingly, I stopped neglecting myself, and my relationship with my family and friends improved.
Second, due to heavy responsibilities and workloads, the assignments and tasks for work and study may be forgotten and overlooked because of inadequate planning. However, by organizing our projects, we can keep track of our duties and finish them on time. For example, there was a period in my third year of university when I had courses including Graphic design and Compiler design, each requiring the completion of multiple projects. Considering I hadn't made a plan and organized my work, I forgot about my Compiler design project. Thankfully our professor gave us extra time to finish the project. Regardless, I wouldn't have had such issues if I had a plan for my studies.
Based on the above reasons, I believe that it is essential for all people to have the ability to organize and plan for their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, so, third, while, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.171875 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12324794635 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1091688824 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1052631579 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157817846517 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489742662761 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589940936531 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132806114348 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681181536399 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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