Do you agree or disagree with following statement? because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of the most important aspect of modern life in comparison of premodern time, is its complexity. This dimension brings a lot of requirements for people to have if they wanna have good life on 21st century. On the other hand, among the scholars and even between the people, it is arising a subject that the youth should be well organized and others think that they should not be well-planed for living in such complex world. In my opinion, former is more preferable than latter (I indicate that not being organized pales into insignificance when compared to being well-planed for having a better life). There are several reasons and explanations relating to this my point of view and it would be the focus of following sections and paragraphs of this essay.
First reason needed to be explained is importance of time in 21st century. All the people have their problems managing and dealing with time. They cannot easily handle their appointments, meetings and most of them have delay in reaching on time. The most important cause of this problem is their inability to work with time. They cannot organize when and how to be prepared. It is essential to instill the significance of being organized in the youth particularly in their schools to work with time. For example, my nephew who is in 4th grade can easily manage his time, but on the other hand my father who is an old man, since has no conception of organization, cannot be planed and always has difficulty to do something on time. My nephew who has learned to handle the time and behave in order has a more successful life in modern society than his grandfather. In short, the importance of time in modern life demonstrates that all people especially the young should be organized.
On the other hand, second explanation required to be clarified about my selection of agreement the youth to be organized is the broadness of subjects that modern youth need to confront. Another important dimension of modern world is that all people should learn a broad area of knowledge, if they wish to have a good life. Modern science compel the people be familiar with computers, basic knowledge of sociology, medical science, the ways that one can manage others and etc. This wide wisdom is so vital in 21st century. To do this duty, all young people should be well organized. For instance, my nephew has a very exact of program that show him when and how study and also it helps him to be mastered in almost all subjects. He has basic knowledge of most sciences including management, mathematics, and even he knows how to persuade a group of people to do what he wants. In short, width of today science has coerced the young people to be more organized in modern time to have the ability the affairs of 21st century.
it is clear to say that agreement with the statement (youth should have the potential to organize) is more acceptable and more pleasant than the opposite view of the discussion (youth not have the ability to plan). Two justifications are provided to buttress my point of view including the importance of time and the significance of being prepared in different range of science in 21st century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: etc.
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in short, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 87.0 52.1666666667 167% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2611.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 551.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7386569873 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65843484018 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424682395644 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8008338629 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.791666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9583333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173993493677 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607250956016 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424055960682 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117931002457 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211770575925 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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