Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without doubt being busy doing so many different things is somehow good however, in my opinion, being implicated with many different things will affect inappropriately their care with all of those tasks or things. I believe that for two influential reasons which i will explore in the following essay. First of all, nowadays the life is so fast and hard. All of us are involved in doing many tasks like going to work, caring with our families and probably studying as well. Time is not enough to do all of those tasks or others; each task requires a certain amount of time to be done. Certainly, we will shorten in one or other. I remember my friend Sarah last year who was participated in acting team, in driving course to get the driving license, studying for an important exam for her hard major and participated in basketball team. She didn’t find enough time to implement all those required tasks which led her to fail in all tasks. Secondly, doing many different tasks inquire and presuppose a huge energy and to be active all the time but that’s impossible, because each one of us has a specific limited ability. If you want to be perfect in each single task, certainly you will fail in one of them and probably in all of them. Take myself as example few months ago I tried to take a music course and learning how to cook, unfortunately I couldn’t do well in both of them. All the time I was exhausted, tired and reduced focus in. Moreover, to do anything perfect or very well, you must have the passion and being obsessed to do it in a successful way. That’s so important issue too. By the way of conclusion, based on those important above factors which affect implementing different many things well in the same time, I would concern that’s impossible to be perfect and expert in doing many different things in the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, by the way, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69486404834 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71739460527 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.1893623768 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265924514628 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100510716935 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084243433637 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265924514628 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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