The article states that working fewer days (4 days or less than 5 days a week) will be more beneficial to the economy of company providing 3 reasons however the lecturer contradicts all the reasons of the author.
At the beginning, the author mentions that working fewer days will increase the profits of the company and improve the rest and alert of the employees. Also it will reduces the errors in the work , on the other hand the professor refutes that by saying that spending more money in training new employees and medical benefits, more employees means more office spaces, more computers which cuts into the company’s economy or costs.
Secondly, the author states that working fewer days will decreases the unemployment but the professor says that the company will expect that who works 4 days will have the same ability of who works 5 days but unfortunately the job will be unpleasant and the employees will work over time to make up the difference.
At last but not the least, the author addresses that working fewer days will increases the time spending with family and activities like exercise but the professor mentions that because of working fewer days will increase the risk of loose jobs and decreases the chances of advancement in career and the company will prefer the workers who work 5 days than 4 days to be hired in management positions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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The article states that working fewer da...
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Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun days is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...tates that working fewer days 4 days or less than 5 days a week will be more benefic...
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Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...tradicts all the reasons of the author. At the beginning, the author mentions th...
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...tradicts all the reasons of the author. At the beginning, the author ...
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Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ve the rest and alert of the employees. Also it will reduces the errors in the work...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...nd alert of the employees. Also it will reduces the errors in the work , on the other ...
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...yees. Also it will reduces the errors in the work , on the other hand the profess...
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Suggestion: ,
... it will reduces the errors in the work , on the other hand the professor refutes...
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Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...ew employees and medical benefits, more employees means more office spaces, more computer...
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Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...o the company's economy or costs. Secondly, the author states that working...
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...o the company's economy or costs. Secondly, the author states tha...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
...hor states that working fewer days will decreases the unemployment but the professor says...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...rk over time to make up the difference. At last but not the least, the author ad...
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...rk over time to make up the difference. At last but not the least, the ...
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Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
... addresses that working fewer days will increases the time spending with family and activ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 235.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87234042553 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63602576973 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48085106383 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 13.0662251656 23% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 21.2450331126 367% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 198.588910958 49.2860985944 403% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 381.666666667 110.228320801 346% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.3333333333 21.698381199 361% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06452816374 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314764734412 0.272083759551 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213591531291 0.0996497079465 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132207504729 0.0662205650399 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241931229016 0.162205337803 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079332734349 0.0443174109184 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.7 13.3589403974 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.77 53.8541721854 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 5.55761589404 234% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.0289183223 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.15 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.42419426049 127% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.7273730684 247% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 10.498013245 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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