Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
The world has changed drastically over the last hunder year due to technological achievements. personally, i believe that nowadays people are more stressful and have anxiety driven attitudes towards their lives. I feel this way for several reasons, which i will explain in the following essay.
First of all, social media makes us more sad and crazy by comparing ourselves with our more successful counterparts. it is safe to say most people all over the world have easy access to internet. it is a good thing for information transformation and overall education for most people, but on the other hand, we tend to see beautiful locations or what our friends and people we know doing on internet. As a result, we are not satisfied with what we are and have. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. I'm a frequent user of facebook and instagram. I try to use these platforms for news and personal enjoyment, but i usually end up looking at my friends accounts and checking what they're doing. Consequently if they were traveling while i was working, i just got nervious and imagined myself as traveling or doing other stuffs. I realize the pattern that more i see other people's lives, more i am unhappy.
Secondly, modern society encourages more individually oriented lifestyle than family oriented lifestyle of previous societies. people in the past were close together with each other and their life goals were for family and their relatives. In contrast, people of today's world have better connection through technology, yet more lonely because in order to catch up the fast phase of nowadays, people have to leave their parents, friends, relatives, and lovers for pursuing their personal goals or so called growth. I think we live in the loneliest of all eras of human history. For instance, during my grandfather's youth he had many siblings and they helped with each other and had one big family goal like building huge house for including every family members even if they became adult and married. but in my era, such dream of having big house for living together with siblings sound ridiculous and unrewarding for personal growth philosophy, yet i fee loneliness because i don not feel such warmness of huge family anymore. In order to be a modern successful person, i have to study abroad leaving my parents home.
In conclusion, i am of the opinion that modern people are more unsatisfied and sad than previous generations felt. this is because social media allows us comparing ourselves with other people frequently, and because we are not family oriented anymore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9632183908 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72053207203 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549425287356 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.446674462 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.80952381 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214763669522 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635341765065 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571387115907 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138590602214 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281229063992 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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