Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
family: Calibri;">The world has today changed a lot and brought different aspects to people’s lives in many ways. it is now difficult to survive without knowing and adapting ourselves to the novel changes like technology, financial expenses of a family, and the communication of the society. When it comes to being happy or having a satisfaction of a life in this area, I strongly believe that people are now less happy or dissatisfied about their lives because of some important reasons.
family: Calibri;">To begin with, everything now comes with money and you will be judged based on your earnings and belongings. My father always tells me that you are what you earn and I need to find money even if it is in the mouth of the lion. As a matter of fact, the ones who are not able to raise their financial situation are unhappy and always accused of not being responsible from the people around. however, people in the past are more happy because the expectation of the family members are less than today and their earnings were enough to live a happy life.
family: Calibri;">another significant thing to mention is that technology has altered our living styles and led people to have more hectic lives. As technology becomes more mature, it makes our life more isolated where we do not need any help from our family members. it means that we are now able to find everything in internet and handle everything be ourselves. Meanwhile, in the past, people come together and ask each other their problems and somehow telling jokes and getting some spiritual aids. So, adult’s advice was played a critical role in the survival and growing of the youngsters. Therefore, people today are not happy because living in an isolated atmosphere with their phones or laptop instead of gathering and asking their questions.
family: Calibri;">however, these changes are not always harmful and have brought many new aspects like living in a more quicker society. As technology grows, it brings about a time improvement in any aspect of our lives. people in the past needed to go to the far-off lands by car our buss and it took nearly one month to go to another country. however, today thanks to the airplane, we can visit other countries in less than 3 hours.
family: Calibri;">
family: Calibri;">All in all, our lives today have been changed and we are now less satisfied comparing to the past. we will be judged based on our outcomes and also technology advancement lead our lives to the more isolated life. But, this change has favored us with the time advancement in every aspect of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96629213483 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16318457403 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496629213483 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9564209818 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270143300498 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843810997897 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714811867665 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140422027338 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833283877481 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.