TPO15-task1
The reading claims that the Cane toad, the native amphibian species native to America, was intentionally brought to Australia to protect farmers’ crops by eating the harmful insects. Then, sadly the toad population increased and now threatens small native species other than pests in Australia. The reading then mentioned some attempts to stop the spread of the Toad in Australia, however, the lecturer states that it is not easy to get rid of these species and refutes all the specified solutions.
First, the reading declares that one possible solution is to build a national fence to block the advance of the toads by preventing them from moving into the parts of the Australia which have not been colonized. The professor, meanwhile, makes the argument that this solution will not stop Cane toads from moving to the new places. The professor then mentions there are always rivers which flow everywhere and can carry young toads and the eggs. Therefore, there is no way to stop young toads and the eggs from getting through the fences.
Second, while the reading passage contends capturing the toads by volunteers could be lead to the control and elimination of these species, the lecturer firmly states that this solution would bring about a serious danger for native frogs.
Finally, although the reading asserts that the control of the cane toad population would be possible by developing a disease which harms only can toads, the professor counters by arguing that this virus could affect the native American toads as well. Professor mentions that some researchers and pet collectors always transfer Australian amphibians to the America. Therefore, this might seriously harm and completely eliminate the cane toads from the ecological system in south America.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22727272727 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53588119447 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 145.348785872 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548951048951 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6021879586 49.2860985944 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.909090909 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526889953584 0.272083759551 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203931912561 0.0996497079465 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089236027045 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305313361404 0.162205337803 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858953302393 0.0443174109184 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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