Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
It is firm believe that world has changed drastically, which causes serious implications on people's emotions. I stand of the opinion that people are less happy or satisfied nowadays, compare their individuals in the past. I feel this way for two main reasons which i will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, a technology development play considerable role on the way we conduct our lives. Each breakthrough entails to super trend devices or modern appliances, used for education purposes like e-books, Ipads, TV etc. An involvement of the technology advances in current every day routine, can be sources of breaking news or any other information. Most of the media is inundated with negative articles, hence it instigates depression on each person reading it.
Furthermore, a hi-tech products has been enmeshed in our lives for entertaining purposes. Accordingly, there is entirely bad impact of people's moods, especially for youngsters when spending much time in front of online games or other form of enjoyment. For instance, my cousin's kid is compelling example of this. Since, they bought him play station he reduced his time going out with peers. At the end of a week my brother's child used to hang out with friends regularly, however now he rooted himself in front of the screen and there is visible shifts in his mood in a bad way. If they hadn't bought him a Playstation, he wouldn't have been doleful.
In conclusion I would say that is absolutely significant changes in human's emotions due to a media's impact and all contemporarily game devices which potentially inflict mental harm and dissatisfaction.
- The similarities between the internet and television 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Sports play an important role in a culture Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- A gift such as a camera a soccer ball or an animal can contribute to a child s development What gift would you give to help a child develop Why Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice 70
- Some people like doing work by hand Others prefer using using machines Which do you prefer 66
- You have received a gift of money The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend Which would you buy Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 76
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...sins kid is compelling example of this. Since, they bought him play station he reduce...
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Suggestion: there are visible shifts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 268.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09328358209 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97998399887 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690298507463 0.524837075471 132% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1451512257 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163674982115 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502734308846 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748416417231 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910139035641 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911288606944 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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