Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Happiness is one of crucial facets of everyone's life and can affect all other aspects significantly. It's been a matter of controversy during the history that how humans can reach the hapiness. As far as reaching a joyful life is considered, some are of the opinion that people were much more happeir than they are in these days, while others believe otherwise. I -for one- subscribe to the first idea on the ground that today's life impose more pressure on individuals, they have less time for their hobbies, and they always want more and more which makes them disappointed.
First, in today's modern life with its galloping progress people need to be more sophisticated and resourceful, so they can keep up the pace. For example, in these days attending school is mandatory for children because if they want to find a decent career in future, they have to be knowledgeable. This demanding tasks put a lot of pressure on individuals from the very first years of their lives. Moreover, these kind of stresses will continue to their adulthood. for instance, finding job, having enough salary, etc.
Second, being obssessed with making money and obtaining success, people have no enough time to enjoy the joys of life. For example, my friend once told me that when he was younger he always wanted to be a game tester but now he doesn't even have time to play videogames for fun. Furthermore, I think that having some qulity time with family is essential in everyone's life to attain delightfulness which is rare in these days.
Last but not least, technologies have adversely affected people's lives especially juveniles. For example, there is luxurious show off in social media that makes young ones to be obssessed with the dream of being reach. The more the people wish to be reach quickly, the less they will be happy.
Finally, with all this taken into account, I do believe that nowadays people are not as happy as their ancestors. Today's demanding tasks, having less time to spend in the way they like, and trying to reach money as fast as possible are the most important reasons why I think so. I think people should consider their hapiness more than they do now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 421, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...be to the first idea on the ground that todays life impose more pressure on individual...
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Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...se if they want to find a decent career in future, they have to be knowledgeable. This de...
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Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...y first years of their lives. Moreover, these kind of stresses will continue to their adul...
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Line 2, column 465, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...esses will continue to their adulthood. for instance, finding job, having enough sa...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s wanted to be a game tester but now he doesnt even have time to play videogames for f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78666666667 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53634908218 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6173040934 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7222222222 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171400817811 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626034033975 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527952638413 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11278564396 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638014343095 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.