Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？ Being creative, rather than
planning carefully, helps people come up with the best solution to a problem
In today’s convoluted and competitive world, it becomes a highly charged and hot debate topic whether it is better for people to have an ability to make plan meticulously or being creative in order to resolve problems. Therefore, some people are leading the proponent of the claim that being creative is more beneficial for people. However, others may take an opposite point of view and believe that planning carefully brings them more benefits in order to solve their problem. If I have to face these two choices, I tend to choose the latter idea. There are some significant reasons, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, by having a great plan, people are allowed to solve their problems without any sorts of difficulties due to the fact that some consequences will not come to people's mind on a spur of time. Hence, during to making a meticulous plan, they can investigate all positive and negative aspects of each decision by seeing others experience and available sources. Let me give you an example when I was a master student, I had a problem to get a great course. I did not know what should I do, I searched on the internet and consulted with some counselor, and eventually, I have understood that I should make a plan to study including time of sleeping, resting, and so forth. By making a careful plan, I could pass my course with high score. For this reason, had I not made a plan, I could not have solved my problems.
Apart from considering all facet of a problem the second debatable point is that on the one hand, some people believe that by planning carefully, a bunch of their will be wasted, which brings them the stressful situation. On the other hand, some others believe that having plan not only do not take their time but also they are allowed to become calm owing to predicting several solutions for every problem. I take the former viewpoint with a pinch of salt and claim that the latter viewpoint is much closer to the reality, for I do believe that the more people make a meticulous plan, the more they can release their stress and tension towards problems. For this reason, by making a careful plan, they will not be staggered to solve their problems, and finally, they can solve their problems with high concentration owing to lack of any stress.
To wrap it up, by considering all aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes the positive importance of making plan on people's lives inasmuch as in the first place they all aspects of their problems will be considered by using other's experiences and online sources, as in the second place, they can prevent themselves from overwhelming and stressful situation by having plan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...that some consequences will not come to peoples mind on a spur of time. Hence, during t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, apart from, to begin with, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2251.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76906779661 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64292589287 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48093220339 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9214156218 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.6875 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152852511758 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568436213713 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380217481597 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982585498856 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321327892601 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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