Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best leader should spend more time listening to other people’s ideas than taking his/her own ideas.
In order that democracy becomes the main trend of the entire society, a new idea comes up that good leaders should consider others’ opinions rather than taking his/her own opinion, which I totally agree with. In this essay I will list several reasons why listening to others is more beneficial than only taking one’s own opinion.
First of all, having more than one person’s opinion means having multiple views of single question, which is capable to supply sufficient various blueprints to handle nearly every situation during the process. In this case, the decisions combined by mixed point of these drafts are more effective since it does not need extra time to adjust. This theory is backed up by Science Daily that the plan, project, decision obtaining multiple perspectives reduce approximately thirty percent of adjustments, which enhanced twenty percent of the processing speed. Compared to only one person system, which probably needs several attempts and adjustment to achieve perfection, multiple cooperators system is absolutely more remarkable and valuable since it boosts the efficiency of developments of corporations into a completely new level.
When the efficiency is involved, quality is the next element which should be concerned. Again as I mentioned before, the blueprints different people present are various and comprehensive, which means the possibility that the mixed of these ideas is completed is at least higher than that from only single person. It is easy to understand since this phenomenon happens in every corner of our lives. Think about the class during high school year, teachers often require students to establish their own rules even they obviously have numerous experiences of teaching class and know what type of rule is necessary. It is because compared with one teacher’s brain which sometimes forgets detailed factors of class, the combination of ten students brains can cover nearly every single point during class, by combining these details together, setting a proper limitation is apparently easy. This is obviously an understandable method to complete a perfect idea at once.
However, everything got exceptions. In fact the perfect human being exists and he or she can make any decision with ease and no any error in it, and I need to confess that it is absolutely true. But the problem is it is hard to tell if a person has that capacity to do so, and it is risky to rely on that uncertain person to do every single decision for everyone. Especially for this fast going era which everything should be quick and precise, time cannot be spent merely on temptation but one step perfection, which cooperation work on.
Overall, in my opinion, multiple work mode has efficiency and quality this era required, which means the value of it outweighs what individual does.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 683, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cooperators'' or 'cooperator's'?
Suggestion: cooperators'; cooperator's
...ustment to achieve perfection, multiple cooperators system is absolutely more remarkable a...
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Line 5, column 701, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... perfection, multiple cooperators system is absolutely more remarkable and valuab...
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Line 5, column 779, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...luable since it boosts the efficiency of developments of corporations into a comp...
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Line 13, column 126, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...she can make any decision with ease and no any error in it, and I need to confess ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, however, if, so, at least, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2398.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23580786026 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76937158324 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585152838428 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 752.4 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6728850956 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.058823529 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9411764706 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177972438801 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541913880954 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740513223529 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103976576173 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117346286172 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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