Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide
The development of today's world helps people reach the outside of their country which is only for rich people in the past. There are two principal methods to travel to other countries including self-travel and tour guide. Many people argue which of them is the best choice. Personally, I consider that joining in a tour leading by guider is the greatest option for time-saving, cheap fee and not getting lost.
To begin with, following a tour guide decreases the rate of being lost. Whenever visitors are dropped at any destination, the instructor constantly checks whether anyone is left. Then he announces us where to gather at when people finished observing the scenery. If they can't find way to get there, the guider will locate and bring them back. Take my situation as an example, during a period having a walk around shopping mall in Singapore, I was so intriguing in buying clothes and then I couldn’t pinpointed where did I stand. It was exceedingly terrible because I didn't know what to do next. Thanks to the tour guide, he found me and leaded me to go back.
Next, it's time-saving when people travel by a tour. One of the mission of the tour guide is to plans for vital destination and prepares meals for visitors. Since the schedule of where and when to go have been set up, visitors solely followed this. As a result, it's unessential for them to search for places or conveyances when they reach the travelling country. Therefore, they just need to enjoy their trip in the way they want. For instance, while I entered Taiwan, everything had been organized, there was no need for me to waste time conceiving what steps to travel around this magnificent country.
Beside reducing the amount of time spending, joining a tour also assists people to save their money. For some special place where visitors come, the fee of tickets has been dramatically cut down. The reason for this is that those places provide discount programs for buying many tickets which applied for a group of people. Getting on tour plays an important role contributes to have an acceptable price when travelling. As the same example of staying in Taiwan, some restaurants offered numerous deals that suit for the number of people with a sustainable price. Thus, I not only had a tasty meal but also paid for a suitable fee.
To sum up, though it feels more free when travelling alone, being in a tour benefits people more for its low rate of being lost, both save time and money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74477958237 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54311606973 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563805104408 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4184782158 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2083333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9583333333 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14445031569 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453099209812 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483415185237 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812924200098 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240384079319 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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