Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Books are not needed anymore because people can read information on computers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
It is highly accepted that book plays a big role in our lives, for it teaches readers quite a few things that will help them to confront with different aspects of their lives. Nowadays, with the advent of computers and their boom, the question of whether books are still needed for reading or they are just wasting of money, has been a topic of controversy among people. Some people prefer books since they are more comfortable to touch papers and words while they are reading, some others, nevertheless, take an opposite point and choose computers. I subscribe to the idea that using such modern technologies and computers is better, although they have some demerits. The following paragraphs will aptly elucidate my viewpoint through two compelling reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...the advent of computers and their boom, the question of whether books are still needed for reading or t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 52.1666666667 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 634.0 1977.66487455 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 126.0 407.700716846 31% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03174603175 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 4.48103885553 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56328319951 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 212.727598566 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.746031746032 0.524837075471 142% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 618.680645161 31% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9098985215 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117146453834 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541268437561 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253967762005 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117146453834 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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