Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is a larger controversial issue all over the world whether boys and girls should study in the same school or not. While some people think that separation is a good idea, I believe that if they appear in the same educational institution, it will strengthen bonding among the boys and girls. Also, identical schooling will help to reduce the discriminatory view on gender. Therefore, I'm completely opposing to divide the boys and girls on the basis of school.
First and foremost, a closer look at the students of combined school shows that they are more extrovert, successful and helpful than others. Actually, these schoolings help to comprehend the critical issues of man and women, as a result, they don't feel any hesitation to share the opinion and work together for the welfare of humanity. Conventionally, women are treated as very less helpful for the socities that why our community confined them in the four walls. If both of the men and women get equal facilities, these traditional thinking can be removed which are actually curse for the world.
Secondly, I think that men and women play an inevitable for building a nation. However, sometimes, we always give priority to the male and ignore female, and separate schools will extend these misconceptions. Thus, women might have the possibility to be treated as a slave. It will lack us behind from the development.
Furthermore, there are some serious consequences of the separate schools. For instance, girls face some physical changes while they turn to the adolescent periods, and boys don't understand these problems. When they need to work in a same group, boys don't realize the problems of women, and it creates a dispute among them. Conversely, women need some privacy this time although they don't get it in the combined school. But, the authority of the school can help girls by providing privacy.
In essence, the aforesaid reasons show that separate school is less effective, and it creates a distance and controversy. Although combined schools have some limitations, I think the benefits outweigh the taboos. So, I'm opposing the notion of separate schooling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0821529745 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79044160902 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558073654391 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.649029742 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0862830735879 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031124672905 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358847982501 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536240139558 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393243343975 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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