Nowadays, in 3rd millennium, of the 21st century, it’s ridiculous to separate on sexual student from each other. In my opinion, these thinking goes on Culture armored of any people like that.
First, in the past of Europa, people thought that, women and men aren’t equal, and women couldn’t wear pants like men, or, they couldn’t have worked like them and be successful also, women shamed on laughed loudly on the streets, all the parents told their daughter to be shine with dresses and jewelry to absorbed the men to got married and never had sex before marriage, be always edele girl. If I want to discusses more about this topic I should say that, Since the 1980, historians working on East Central Europe, as on other parts of the world, have shown that historical experience has been deeply gendered. culture as a whole, to restrict the access of women and people identifying with non-normative sexuality, to material and cultural goods, and to devalue and marginalize their ways of life.
Second, throughout history both equality and difference between women and men have typically resulted in disadvantage for women. Men and women have generally engaged in different sociology-cultural, political and economic activities, and this gender-based division of labor, which has itself been subject to historical change, has tended to put women in an inferior position. Even when women and men appeared as equals in one sphere of life, this perceived equality often resulted in drawbacks or an increased burden for women in another area and women ‘s contribution was still devalued as compared to men ‘s. for example, in 2017, In studio BBC, salaries of men was more than women workers in England, therefor, this is what led to the demonstration of women's rights defenders. The case is currently under way in the courts.
Third, if it does boys wouldn't know anything about girls and girls wouldn't know anything about boys and it would be harder for them to communicate as the days go on. They can't learn anything from each other because boys and girls have a different way of thinking so it would be really hard from them to learn better. in some Muslim countries, like as Iran, they separated students by sexual, and it has many disadvantages, such as child rape.
In conclusion, for clarity, psychologists sometimes distinguish gender differences, which are related to social roles, from sex differences, which are related only to physiology and anatomy. Using this terminology, gender matters in teaching more than sex.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, still, third, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13126491647 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80883905595 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584725536993 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8491924097 48.9658058833 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.333333333 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9333333333 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0562404451193 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0203410530933 0.076458572812 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023349554519 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0338799998006 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299851599665 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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