The feeling of well-being or satisfaction has always been by far the most important consideration of people. This concept is highly influenced by time, as a subjective concept, and especially the passage of it because the interaction of people together and also their works are affected by the concept of time. This issue brings to light this question whether people today are less happy than they were in the past due to the fact that the world is changing more quickly. In my opinion, this is a moot premise that people feel less comfortable when they encounter quick experiences.
It is now common knowledge that the emergence of technology in today's society results in a more quick life for humans. But does it really cause the sense of less satisfied? New York, a large modern city in the U.S with more than 8.5 Million population, is known as one of fastest cities in all the world in terms of the rate of commercial transactions, trades, and even the speed of people in their daily speaking. The interesting point is that New York contains a large body of people including academic community and business owners who they have a sense of satisfaction and acceptance because they pursuing and also successful in what they are interested in, especially in the highest possible speed. Thus, the sense of well-being is completely subjective and depends upon the people' perspective in life, which the fact substantiated in psychology.
Other groups of people, however, have opposite viewpoint, believing a highly changeable world put humans on works they are not necessarily suitable. They never rush to do or achieve something is highly time-consuming. For instance, the people in some countries like Sweden and Netherland subscribe to this opinion and the statistics conducted on the feeling of happiness and satisfaction indicates that the people living in these countries with this type of perspective have the highest rank in happiness, while they do not follow highly ambitious projects and economic status in their life, and spend their time slower than what you can imagine.
In conclusion, it is my deep conviction that the sense of well-being is completely subjective and thus different people can experience either in either when the world changes quickly or when it goes slowly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
... New York, a large modern city in the U.S with more than 8.5 Million population, ...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the fastest'.
Suggestion: of the fastest
...8.5 Million population, is known as one of fastest cities in all the world in terms of the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07124010554 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83885885713 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530343007916 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.1932741725 48.9658058833 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.846153846 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1538461538 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23215758678 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076784344339 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602493263956 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132402390021 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404755562203 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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