what are the qualities of a good neighbor?
In all communities, people should share their home area with each other so, they should have respect for each other. In village area because of far houses from each other they don’t have that connection of people like as apartment. By the way, the qualities of their behavior are so important kind, polite and clean and tidy.
Nowadays, living in an apartment have own rules, people should obey them, and if they didn’t, they should answer back to police. A good example is, I lived in Chicago for 4 years because of my job, and we had different kinds of people in our tower. And most of us we didn’t know each other because we just living there and were very busy just sometimes we said hello on the elevator. I worked in ER [emergency room] of the nearest hospital in that place as a nurse and I have to work hard to save more money therefore, I always tired, my home was my refuge that I escaped from a busy day to sleep and started next early morning with big smile. Whatever, one night at midnight, I woke up with loudly music from fifth floor and all neighbors shouted together to turn the volume down, but he didn’t care, they called police and he didn’t open the door for them too. The police team opened the door by force, and Imprisoned himself in room, they kicking the door and found him. Not is only lying on the bed, but also died because of overdose cocaine. Some of neighbors called me cheeked him, is he alive or not but the police ignored it because they were sure he dead. At the end, people should follow all community rules to all have satisfied of living close each other.
On the other hand, it has different situations in some countries and cultures, they are living together without any problem and they take care of their children, but I heard 2 years ago in Russia, one neighbors had rape to little girl who his wife look after her while, kindergarten time finished and her father was at work until evening, so he trusted them because they have 3 children and she was playing with them. That 5-year-old kid talked to her dad and told him all the bad happening to her and after lots of arguing, her father killed all the member of that family with a gun.
In conclusion, people should live together because of urbanization, it is an equal failing to trust everybody. Although all the people in the world should obey all community rules and humanity, to have peaceful and happy life for long time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also
...hey should have respect for each other. also, in village area because of far houses ...
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Suggestion:
...lities of their behavior is so important kind, polite and clean and tidy. livi...
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Suggestion: Living
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Suggestion: [
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Suggestion: Police
...didn't open the door for them too. police opened the door by force, and Imprisone...
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Suggestion: Other
... also died because of overdose cocaine. other neighbors called me to cheeked him, is ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
... follow all community rules to all have satisfy of living close each other. On the...
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...d rape to little girl who his wife look after her after her kindergarten time finished and her fath...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, kind of, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28519379614 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.9354057818 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3125 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0496821549366 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0182400316738 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292669137633 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0256017774875 0.150856017488 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170923797395 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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