In this age of advancement with the progress of technology, all people and scientists are trying to provide a life full of peace and prosperity. So, the factories make more cars to use them in all parts of our life such as smarts robots. Also, the transfer cars have smart bot to help people in a better way. But, some of the people think this growing of technology has some bad effects on poor people life, when those will replace human beings.
First, in these 20th, because of technology have got progress, scientists think about how they can make a car to improve our life and do our job, and universities has a major that called Robotics to teach students how make their fabulous bot, for example, in 2010 I studied in robotics and cyber physical systems in UCLA university in Malesia country, and we can help the Firefighters because, they are as close to superheroes as we’re likely to see on Earth. But, there are some things even they can’t do. That’s why we’re working on autonomous systems that can be used by firefighters and first res ponders to access areas, and save lives, where humans otherwise wouldn’t be able to. researchers at UCLA are using humanoid and non-humanoid mechanics technology to make life better for the humans on the planet. All that, and a team that’s developing soccer robots that compete, and win in World Cup-style competitions. Their goal: to be able to beat the actual World Cup Champions in soccer… by 2050. And the people in the world shouldn’t be worried about anything because we don’t want to bothering them we just want to make their life easier.
Second, it is true that with the increase of the human population, the manufacture of different brand cars has increased but, all for better quality effort. Also with the advancement of science, they built cars that use solar energy. For example, solar-powered cars are actually electric vehicles that are powered by solar panels. The panels are used produce electricity by converting the sun's rays into energy, which is then stored in solar batteries. The car runs by using the energy that is stored in the batteries.
Third, some solar aircraft that flew around the world without fuel. progress in the field of clean technologies, such as the ultra-lightweight and insulating materials Convector developed for the plane. The insights gained from Solar Impulse have been analyzed and are now merged in a new project: 1,000 ideas for a sustainable future. Because what those pioneers of the air achieved will benefit all people, even on the ground. Today there are already thousands of marketable solutions that could promote economic growth and preserve nature at the same time. However, they are often hidden in start-ups or research laboratories, states Bertrand Pic card, pilot of Solar Impulse and founder of the initiative. Still, only few know that those solutions are just waiting to be applied in a profitable way. for example, the flying laboratory in Germany, are providing some of the experts evaluating all suggestions regarding their contribution to production, application, market compatibility, and sustainability.
In conclusion, everywhere in the world, we are faced with a growing number of cars that are only for become easier our lives, and indeed that causes environmental destruction, but all scientists are trying to protect all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Progress
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Message: Consider replacing "in a profitable way" with adverb for "profitable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, still, then, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2853.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 560.0 407.700716846 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09464285714 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90406503887 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526785714286 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 889.2 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.1763057268 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.12 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0883853539368 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288814476765 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249211462877 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521626493079 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223656452182 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 86.8835125448 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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