Nowadays, people have many options to have meals at home or eat out side, and it depends on different conditions they faced. But in many reasons people are divided in 2 ways; traditional people and modern people. By the way, I want to start my gap on this way to describe how people decide to eat their meals more comfortable for all family members?
First, for some couple is too hard to go out and have quiet lunch on luxury restaurant with small children, because if you have children you should know that how much hard to take care of them without any noise, so, it’s easier to eat at home but not all family do it because some of them believe that it’s normal life to have child and they are happy children like all. some other couple, decide to have a romantic night at home to cook and have sexy night until midnight. Some rich people booked the room and spend all dinner time there, and it’s such as outside indoor eating.
Second, traditional people and modern people has some different ideas about health and diseases, the first group think that, outside foods, like as fast foods and all restaurants aren’t clean and sanitary, for preparing foods, and also, if they have 5 stars in health but it’s not trustful to eat. Maybe these people are Obsessive and they are Cornering and escaping from the community, the second group, open the Instagram / social network/ and search about yummy food tastes to find those people who, eating in all restaurants in the world to show the costs and how much the quality of that place and Personnel and also, the taste of foods are good? So all customers can decide to go where is the best or the nearest one is? Or sometimes eats different internationals foods.
In conclusion, we face on many differentiates type of humans with Weird ideas, this is okay to enjoying community in society. it depends on situations people decide to have special days out or having birthday party in night clubs with their friends or have private party at home with their family. Both of them is worthy to have fun.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...ny options to have meals at home or eat out side, and it depends on different conditions...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...d and they are happy children like all. some other couple, decide to have a romantic...
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Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... okay to enjoying community in society. it depends on situations people decide to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6621253406 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33442576568 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555858310627 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.870445493 48.9658058833 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.615384615 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2307692308 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218745415243 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080130067362 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512884269631 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13584026242 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506231099427 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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