Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Childhood is the happiest time of person life
Today there is no shortage of debate that the best time of people`s life is the childhood. But a lot of people are strongly convinced that the childhood has a large number of disadvantages, for example, all children are influenced by their parents. But, I totally disagree with this point of view, and I feel this way for some reasons.
First of all, children have a lot of time for entertainment or amusement. It is common knowledge that all adults are extremely overloaded with their work or studuing. Moreover, they have a lot of issues, for example, earning money or growing up children. But, only during the childhood, people are able to spend their time on favourite things. According to my personal experience, when I was a child, I used to spend a lot of time drawing. Furthermore, it was one of my passion. But unfortunately, when I have become an adult, I do not have this opportunity to avoid my free time on drawing, because I am an extremely busy with my study.
Secondly, children do not know a lot of about this world, so they are an extremely gladden to learn something new. It is definitely true that during the childhood, people try to learn basic things to clarify their understanding of the entery world. In addition, they are able to delight every moments, despite some difficulties. According to my sister experience, her age is four, she really does not know a large number of things, but she craves to know everything. Moreover, when she learns something, this makes her an extremely happy and satisfied, because she feels that it is her own breakthrought.
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, it is goes without say that the childhood is the greatest time of people`s life, because children are not overloaded with some difficulties and they are able to enjoy every moment of their lives.
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in addition, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78125 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91008483553 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509375 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4175054384 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160107960129 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538881442163 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480488729796 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10821242129 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471427642868 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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