People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Today there is no shortage of debate that a lot of people prefer to travel abroad because they find it interesting and valuable experience. On the other hand, others would rather travel in their own country because they are strongly convinced that it has more benefits than traveling in other countries. From my point of view, it will be more pleasant to take a trip overseas and I feel this way for some reasons.
First of all, travelling to the another country gives you an opportunity to learn more about other cultures. It is common knowledge that all countries have their own unique culture with special customs and traditions. For example , in Russia there are a large number of holidays which exist only in this country, such as , Ivano Kupalo or Maslenitca. Moreover, without travelling to the another country you will never broaden your outlook.
Secondly, this option to visit another coutry gives you a chance to learn new languages. It goes without say that our huge world has a wide variety of languages. Furthermore, I know exactly that nobody want to learn somthing without inspiration. According to my personal experience, before visiting United Kindom, I have never thought about learning another languages. So, after my trip to England, I decided to improve my linguaistic knowledge. That is why, I suppose that traveling to the foreign countries broadens your horizons.
Finally, you are able to meet new friends around the world during your vacation. It is definitely true that having a large number of friends around the world has a lot of benefits. For example, if you meet some new people from other country, you will be able to spent your next vacation there with pleasant company. Also, friendship gives you an opportunity know more unique features of this country there live your friend. This features will be about some good places to have a lunch or some awesome places which you will never find on maps .
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, I would like to say that travelling to the foreign countries have more advantages than travel among your own country. Our world has a large number of beautiful places, so it will be difficult to visit them all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cial customs and traditions. For example , in Russia there are a large number of h...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ions. For example , in Russia there are a large number of holidays which exist only in this count...
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Line 4, column 321, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hich exist only in this country, such as , Ivano Kupalo or Maslenitca. Moreover, w...
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Line 8, column 116, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...tion. It is definitely true that having a large number of friends around the world has a lot of b...
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Line 8, column 473, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[1]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'have lunch'.
Suggestion: have lunch
...tures will be about some good places to have a lunch or some awesome places which you will n...
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Line 8, column 542, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...places which you will never find on maps . By the way of conclusion, based on a...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...l among your own country. Our world has a large number of beautiful places, so it will be difficu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, i suppose, such as, by the way, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91466666667 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55615387302 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0896333191 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.15 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293181829895 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806735926276 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103230979904 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180151260209 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117483722183 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.