Should children de required with household chores?
Today there is no shortage of debate that children are have to do household chores, because it will be beneficial for their future. A lot of people believe that if children will clean their rooms or wash the dishes after lunch, it makes them more independent and develops a lot of vital skills. Moreover, I also support this point of view, and I feel this way for some reasons.
Firstly, household chores are able to help children to learn a lot of about hygiene. It is common knowledge that hygiene is an extremely vital aspect of live, because our health depends of it. Furthermore, there are a large number of people, who neglect hygiene, so they suffer from some diseases frequently. So, if children know sufficient about hygiene and how they should follow it, they will never experience some illness.
Secondly, it will be beneficial for children to know how sustain their home properly, because it is one of the important skills in the future. It goes without say that, all skills and habits are form in the childhood, because in this period of life people percept information better. In addition, habits, which was formed in the childhood, stay in mind for a long time. So, due to this fact I strongly convinced that parents should teach their children how make their chose in a right way, because I is vital for their health.
Finally, parents should explain their children that it is necessary to make their household chores. It is definitely true that a lot of parents force their children to perform a lot of tedious household chores. Also, children are able to understand it incorrectly or even think that it was their punishment. So, I suppose that parents should teach their children how to do their chores as a play, because it will increase the children`s interest in chore.
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, it goes without say that it will definitely facilitate children`s future life, if they learn how to sustain their house, because it is not only healthy, but also an esthetical beauty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
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Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ach their children how make their chose in a right way, because I is vital for their health. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, i feel, i suppose, in addition, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83238636364 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63039188222 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5427532828 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3125 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190345719316 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775377201066 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773029171825 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112760181301 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751596215576 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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