Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
No one can deny the fact that there are both positive and negative aspects of the statement that young ones should help their families in daily household chores as soon as they area able to do so.If I were forced to choose, I would definitely agree with the statement.There are a plethora of reasons behind this which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, it is my firm belief that if a child learns doing household chores at an early age then it would be a big asset to his family.There will be less burden of daily household chores on his family and chores would get finish sooner.Even doing small things such as washing dishes, sweeping the floor, cooking food can help a child in many different ways.My opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience.When I moved to Seattle, Washington for my higher studies I used to live with my friends in a shared apartment.At that time each of us were doing our daily chores on our own as hiring a maid did not meet our monthly expenses.We had distributed our daily work accordingly and that helped us save money.If I had not learnt these daily skills then living in that apartment would have been proven costly to me.It is essential for a child to learn household chores as it will not only help him/her in near future but will also make him more responsible.
Secondly, it makes a child self-reliant and more disciplined.Various researches have also proved that doing daily chores in nothing less than doing physical exercise.For instance, one of my friend was obese in his childhood.To reduce his belly fat he started to help out his home in her routine work.He continued this for two months and he lost almost seven kilos of his weight.Being a child if we can't do any big help to our parents we can always help them by doing small things.For instance, a seven year old kid cannot cook but can definitely keep his toys at proper place, arrange the book-shelf properly, keep his room clean etc.These small little things can also help reduce load on our parents.
In the light of above mentioned reasons, I certainly feel that it is essential for a child to learn household-chores at an early age .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67268041237 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75601426349 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561855670103 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 97.0 20.1344086022 482% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 325.527648595 48.9658058833 665% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 453.25 100.406767564 451% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 97.0 20.6045352989 471% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 5.45110844103 422% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18678779234 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12134197134 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084262062336 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12134197134 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084262062336 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.1 11.7677419355 417% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 58.1214874552 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 10.1575268817 382% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.99 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.62 8.01818996416 145% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.8 10.0537634409 406% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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