Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social Networking Web site. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The common thinking is that because the interesting high-technology things, children are addicted to those and it is hard to educating them. However, I disagree with this statement by saying that students can take advantage of those high-technology things.
First of all, from my opinion, addicting behavior is not because how fantastic the toys are, is because of the family education. Even though there is no Internet, addicting people would like to play other things, like gambling or racing the cars. Instead, if everyone’s family education is successful, no body will addicting anything.
Second, children can gain more information by using high-technology things. There are trillions of study materials on Internet. While students confuse in problems, the references from the Internet can solve the majority of problems. Also, those high-technology things, like smart phones or pads, can be e-books, so that students can learn the knowledge as much as the whole textbooks without overweight bag.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'educate'?
Suggestion: educate
...are addicted to those and it is hard to educating them. However, I disagree with this sta...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...'s family education is successful, no body will addicting anything. Second, ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 407.700716846 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53548387097 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.48103885553 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10536442973 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 212.727598566 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670967741935 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 618.680645161 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0848614164 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954258779156 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413351858547 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342423141765 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661377210099 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244385394399 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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