Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
since down of civilization, it is not secret that education is the essential ingredient in nurturing children for their job’s future. The invertible question has engendered among critics whether using new technology has detrimental impacts on educating children or not. some people are inclined toward the opinion that the appearance of some new technology would hinder children not learn perfectly. Nevertheless, others believe otherwise. I firmly subscribe the farmer group on account of some conspicuous reasons, two of which will delve into in the ensuring paragraphs.
The first exquisite that makes me hold to the belief that is not having enough stamina to fulfill their tasks. To specific more, the advent of cellphones, online games and social networking web site provides the improper situations for students revolving their whole life. it is axiom that involving in these circumstances renders them distraction. On the other hand, not far distance but past little, pupils fully concentrated on their studies, taught during the schools, passed their class with flayer color. A vivid example can drive the fact home. According to the a recent survey, the number of children using Instagram all an entire day has been increasing day by day. there is a surge as children are not motivated enough to persevere in their education. Therefore, to teach them is being heavy burden on teacher s’ shoulders.
Another reason deserving some word is that to be more secluded. it is not go unnoticed, the great amount of children spend on browsing, doing online game and to name but a few. Admittedly, it is resulted in encountering mentally issues. My cousin’s experience can exemplified this matter. As regret of his doctor, he is suffering to get acquainted with someone due to he is perpetually involved in online games. Besides, he cannot make friends since she is accustomed to being alone. In their school, his tutors have difficulty to contribute him to team work. As a result, one factor can impede the progress of learning is that not being sociable.
In an assumption, pursuant I alluded to some proof above, on can deduce that teaching adolescent severely arduous in modern’s life with technology in comparison with the life was in last decades. it is because is there shortage of focus on their subjects, but also not lack of sociability. I highly recommend that parent should take consideration their offspring, be more selective what they are done daily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20646766169 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87486110372 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629353233831 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2088082874 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2083333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142195973625 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313777554655 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402370850236 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774683207864 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160254390176 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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