Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend more money on improving access to the internet than public transportation.
The government tries to make life easier for families, therefore it spends money on internet access or public transportation. it is believed that internet services are important than public transportation and the government should enhance its access. personally, I believe public transportation is extremely important compared to the internet. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, Investing in public transportation help to decrease climate change. Nowadays, the population is rising so people need transportation systems more than the past. but, transportation systems such as buses, taxies are not more therefor citizens prefer to use personal cars consequently it increases the usage of fuels which are dangerous and affect climate change. For example, in my country, there is not more public transportation instead of there are lots of personal cars according to the use of fuel is a lot. Unfortunately, it pollutes the weather and damages the Ozone layer.
Furthermore, public transportations profit the people who live in the countryside. people who live in the suburbs would like to provide perfect conditions for their families and children. As a result, they have to come to cities to sell their crops or send their children to study in cities. If there is not perfect public transportation they have to immigrate to cities where it might there are no job opportunities. For example, my uncle lived in the countryside he had a comfortable life at their, but his children have to come city for education. Since there are not perfect transportation systems their children arrived late, moreover they got back home late because of a lack of enough public transportation. my uncle was always worried and he decided to solve that problem once and for all. he sold his farming lands and come to the city. In the city the conditions were not convenient for him, he could not find a job and his children leave school. this example demonstrates a simple problem could create a huge issue.
To put it in a nutshell, I believe the government should increase and improve public transportation. because it prevents damaging to climate change and is helpful to parents who live in out of cities.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend more money on improving access to the internet than public transportation. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i feel, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08918918919 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05642577126 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516216216216 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6070261436 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183108924416 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604416887465 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885413191798 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142090532838 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105045483481 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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