Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of art than the support of athletics.
Governments' budget expenses determine which activity will be prevalent in society. we can prove this statement by comparing the relationship between the improvement of activity among people and the money that has been spent on it by the government in a country. Although many people think that supporting art may be more important, I believe that governments should spend more money in support of athletics. I will explain my reasons below.
First and foremost, if a government focuses on getting the best results in sports competitions, it should have a strong plan for sport in the country to grow the best athletics. paying attention to the sport in society is very important in many aspects. it can help people not only physically, but also mentally to be robust which makes the society fresh and intelligent. According to the scientists, by enough physical activity, the brain can work better so people can think properly and do their best in their job, education and etc. As a result, by spending more money in support of athletics, society will be successful and pioneer not only in sport but also in many other fields.
For example in my country, the government pays special attention to the support of athletics. The government compels the schools to invest in children to find their interest in sport and improve it. so the government ensures children's health by trying to make them successful athletics.
Secondly, watching sports competitions and being the winner of sports matches is much more attractive for people than be the best in the arts events. most people have a favorite sport. many people football, some other baseball, some volleyball. these sport's teams attend in important competitions every year like world cup matches, Olympic competitions, etc. every year hundreds of millions of people wait for these matches to watch so they expect governments to support these sports properly in order to get the best result in competitions. art fans are not in the majority in societies so it is better that governments response to the majority of a society's request. For example in my country, world cup competitions are one of the most important events that we wait for it every four years. people here expect the government to do their best to get the best result. All the people watch these matches with excitement and have very fun during the matches.
To draw a conclusion, as I said above, governments should spend more money in support of athletics to ensure the individual's physical and mental health to be looker-on a pristine society and prevent treatment coats. also because the sports fans are in the majority to pay attention to society's majority interests.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.046875 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76335228882 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453125 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2488485172 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3043478261 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4782608696 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4347826087 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242576774287 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073278638531 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975666814441 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164891418947 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698057896363 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.