Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that the quality of one university's professors plays the prominent role in being the prestigious university. No one can blind eye to this factor's impact on the universities' success. A controversial question is raised related to the issue is that how much effect has the money which pays to the professors on the improvement of the quality of education. Some people may hold this viewpoint that universities should spend more salary for their professors. However, other look this concept from different lens and beleive that having high income has no influence on the quality of education. In my perspective, the first beleif is true. From what follows, I will pinpoint some of outstanding reasons.
One of the most predominant reason coming mind related to the statement is that the high salary can be a motivation for the professors who wanted to educate the students. From psychological stand point, this money can release their stress and eliminate thei obstacles about having the good focus on the students' educating. Nowadays, because of hectic and expensive lives, all the people have some financial pressure. Accordinng to this additional stress and pressure, the professors are not able to concentrate to teach in hospitable way. So, spending more salary for one professor difinitly encourage him to teach more proper.
Furthermore, the other equally principal reason advocated my idea is that if one work includes high quality, we should pay it more. This is the social rule and is true in all around of the world. Therefore, if one professor have the especial and unique educational method and by this method, he is prosper to teach students efficiently, earning high salary is his right. For example, professor Rafiee, one of the most prestigious and prosperous professor in Iran, have the salary higher than other professors. He does not teach without giving this amount of money. So, if one university wants to hire this professor in order to enhance its educational system, they must pay high salary for him.
The last but not the least reason is that in the age of technologies' explosion, one person is more thrive than others, if he has the well-educated professors and is educated by effective educational system. This means that if the universities spend high salary for their professors, they can utilize the more optimistic tools for education and improve their educational method which in turn results into improved the quality of students' education. An empirical test conducted in West Asia obviously demonstrates that obove 80 percent of the successful students in one country study in the universities which hire most renown professors which they earn higher salary than others. This clarifies the point that spending more money on salaries of the professors has profound effect on the improvement of the quality of the education.
From what has been mentioned above, if one weighs the merits and demerits of spending high salay for professors, he can safely reach the conclusion that paying haigher salaries for professor is proper for education's quality owing to the said reasons. All in all, it is anticipated that universities spend more money for their professors in future, if they want to reveluate their educational systems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'universities'' or 'university's'?
Suggestion: universities'; university's
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prospered'.
Suggestion: prospered
...tional method and by this method, he is prosper to teach students efficiently, earning ...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to reveluate their educational systems.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233276157804 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.145797598628 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108061749571 0.0866891130778 125% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0343053173242 0.046263068375 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.041166380789 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137221269297 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0343053173242 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82133180791 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0240137221269 0.0309702414327 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11320754717 0.0887237588012 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0171526586621 0.0209618222197 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0154373927959 0.0139019557991 111% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3280.0 2387.08602151 137% => OK
No of words: 534.0 408.028673835 131% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14232209738 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368913857678 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2734082397 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211610486891 0.174417080927 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.164794007491 0.112833075102 146% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82133180791 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468164794007 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.0525133235 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.25 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9612441344 48.84282405 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 49.59082397 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.82945736434 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35451582778 0.300154397459 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0996418762957 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0670822392497 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.515541481842 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161689584755 0.151897553556 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145104684235 0.114077575197 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779582052294 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.485421209257 0.336927656856 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0254359852226 0.067059652881 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263359238799 0.210909579961 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583294497416 0.0618886996521 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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