Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents jobs Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' jobs.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Children play an essential role in our society. They implement today's learning in the future. No doubt, there are positive and negative aspects of choosing similar jobs to our parents. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely suggest to opt the same field as parents. I had a firm belief that children should select the same field that are similar to their parent's domain for several reasons, and would develop them in the subsequent paragraphs.

To begin with, children can take guideance from their parents about the knowledge they acquired over time. Although technical skills learned by parents during their job may differ from today's skills, the fundaments remain same. Furthermore, processes such as planning, controlling, reporting, etc. in any organization are improved with time but the essence remains intact. I must say that my opinion on his matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience. For example, last year, after attended University, I joined a german mulitnational company in India. In this company, I took a role of Project Manager where I handled international Hydro Power projects. Likewise, my father who is retired now, also worked in the similar domain over years. As a result, nowadays, I always seek his support while handling the complex situation of exporting electo-mechanical equipement to other countries such as Loas, Uganda and Austria. For this reason, it is condusive to puruse a similar job as our parents to take continuous support from our parents.

Secondly, children can expand their network if they persue the same field as their parents, which means that they don't need to do the hardship developing a new network especially in the sales department. Furthermore, in today's competing world, it is undeinable that maximum business growth can only be achieved by strong network within the country or outside. Drawing from my nephew's experience, who is working for an architecure firm as a Sales Manager. Accordingly, he needs to develop a network to imrove his company's order inflow. Thanks to his mother, who also worked in this industry for 30 years, supported him to connect with her links. Cosnequently, today, he is one of the successful Sales Manager in his company. As we can see from this example, how important it to expand a network to be a successfull professional.

In view of the reasons mentioned, I firmly propose to children to choose jobs in the similar field as their parents. This is because they can receive continuous guidance from their parents as well as expand their network.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest opting'.
Suggestion: suggest opting
...re forced to choose, I would definitely suggest to opt the same field as parents. I had a firm...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...as their parents, which means that they dont need to do the hardship developing a ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83677262246 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4201010757 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70833333333 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279478238547 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733655376371 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896746259264 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199750431793 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860224071963 0.0645574589148 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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