There are different opinions on whether it is better for children to continue their parents' path as their future career or make their own path and choose a job different from their parents. Although some people think that continuing parents' job increases the odds of prosperity and success in favor of children, I believe otherwise, maintaining that children will not find their way toward success unless they build their own path and do what they really want. In what follows, I will delve into the most persuasive reasons to substantiate my perspective.
Without a doubt, the most consequential reason regarding continuing parents' jobs in the future or not is what children's interests rely on. Nowadays, most children spend a certain amount of their daily lives in academic environments such as school and university. They learn different topics and become acquainted with various subjects and their real-life applications. This is unlike the children's lifestyle in the past when they had to help their parents with their daily tasks, and consequently, they chose their parents' careers as theirs regardless they liked it or not. On the other hand, today, children can choose their future careers based on what they have learned during their education as well as their fields of interest. In this way, the likelihood of becoming prosperous increases to a great extent for them. Therefore, this reason clearly manifests that choosing a similar job to their parents is not the best option for children.
Although the previous reason is the first one crossing the mind at first glance, another remarkable point deserving some words here is to expand their skills. It is handy in today's intricate world if people improve their skills in different fields. Usually, people have some shallow knowledge about what their parents do. If children choose a career other than their parents, they can use their parents' knowledge and experience in their job and look at the challenges and difficulties they encounter from various perspectives. Consequently, they increase their odds of becoming successful in their carrier. Thus, this point illustrates that it is crucial for children to choose jobs different from their parents.
All in all, many people are in favor of continuing parents' jobs as the best option for children. Nevertheless, the foregoing reasons lead us to conclude that not only is it not the best option for children to choose a job similar to their parents, but it is also cardinal for their success to choose a job different from theirs; this is because in this way children choose their jobs based on their interests and also can use their parents' experience in their own career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, nevertheless, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1179138322 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64719587321 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448979591837 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4428080333 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.388888889 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490185974534 0.236089414692 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191046325177 0.076458572812 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141839129591 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3874641765 0.150856017488 257% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606590943048 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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